Ivystar, Leader of OceanClan

Name~ Ivykit Ivypaw Ivyfeather Ivystar
Gender~ She
Age~ 40 Moons
Rank~ Leader
Clan~ OceanClan
Appearance~ a sleek, darkly colored tortoiseshell she-cat with sparkling, pale amber eyes. She has a long tail, and white toes only on her left back paw.
Personality~ Ivystar is a very interesting cat to say the least. She was the most unexpected cat to become leader, and though many cats had their doubts, she excels at it. She is confident and tends to be a bit stand offish, but she knows when enough is enough. Although she leads with self assurance, her true self is much more insecure than the face she puts on. she often doubts her decisions, and will always rely on second opinions when making a choice. When she gets angry, she only has control over her sharp tongue about 75% of the time, and sometimes she can't help her sarcastic sense of humor. She has always been a bit of a rebel, but that is what makes her such an excellent leader.
Skills~
Fighting~9, Hunting~7, Swimming~3, Climbing~8, Strength~5, Stamina~ 5, Memory~7, Speed/Agility~9
Family~
Mother: Wrensong (Alive)
Father: Hazelfang (deceased)
Brothers: Foxtail (alive)
Sisters: N/A
History:
Born to a loving and compassionate mother, Ivykit and Foxkit would have had the ideal upbringing if they hadn't been the most mischievous kits in the clan. Every other day they were getting into trouble, and the second they were out of it they managed to get back in it again. As they got older, they mellowed out a bit but never enough to loose their reputation as the trouble makers. As apprentices, the remained partners in crime and didn't fight or bicker as most siblings would at that age. Typically when two cats are too much alike they don't get along, but with these two it was the opposite. They were exactly alike, and very rarely disagreed on anything at all. At point it seemed like they could read each other's minds. They never lost this closeness as they grew into warriors. They had never faced any difficulties or struggles up until this time, for it was when their father was attacked and killed by a badger. Sick with grief, their mother took refuge as an elder, leaving her son and daughter to cling to each other. Not long after, to everyone's surprise, Ivyfeather was appointed as deputy. Foxtail wasn't jealous at all, and immediately began to brag about how he knew she would become leader someday, despite her telling him to shut up about it. As one tragedy happened after another, Wrensong fell ill with an unidentifiable disease, one which she was healed of but did considerable damage to her mind and memory. As Ivyfeather was still angry with her mother for shying away after their father's death, she found this news even harder to cope with than it should have been. She struggles with it day to day, and leans on her brother to help her through it. 

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